Crafting an Effective Sales Letter for Multiplication Secrets: Solving the Pain Points of Parents and Kids
My Methodology for Boosting Sales through Targeted Copy and Compelling Messaging
Table of Contents:
- Introduction
- Researching the Target Audience
- Understanding the Pain Points
- The Video Sales Letter Framework
- The Final Result: Video Sales Letter
Introduction:
In this case study, I delve into the process of crafting a persuasive sales letter for Multiplication Secrets, an educational product designed to help kids learn and memorize multiplication facts. By conducting thorough research and addressing the pain points of parents and children, I aimed to create a compelling sales pitch that resonates with the target audience.
Researching the Target Audience:
To start, I defined the target audience as parents with children aged 7 to 11.
Understanding that parents would be the primary purchasers, I focused my marketing efforts on capturing their attention. Taking into account the age range and location (primarily the US), I tailored my targeting accordingly.
Understanding the Pain Points:
To gain deeper insights into the pain points of my target demographic, I conducted a survey of over 100 parents. This Ryan Levesque-style survey helped me uncover the most pressing challenges faced by parents when it comes to teaching multiplication to their children. The identified pain points included:
- Frustration and impatience in children regarding their lack of progress
- Difficulty in motivating kids, often met with excuses like relying on calculators
- Challenges in keeping children focused during practice sessions
- Struggles with memorizing multiplication facts for larger digits
- Generation gap: Parents feeling out of sync with the way math is taught today
- Limited mental recall in children hindering concept retention
- Dissatisfaction with other online courses lacking necessary resources and support
- Unique learning styles of children leading to insufficient personal attention in classrooms
For your educational purposes, I've made the survey and results available to the public so you can the exact questions I used to find the most pressing pain points in this target audience.
You can view it here: https://www.surveymonkey.com/results/SM-JSNVFLC67/
To really get a feel for how I sifted out these pain points, click the "Individual Responses" tab... I think you'll find it incredibly enlightening.
The Video Sales Letter Framework:
When crafting a sales letter, the most important part is getting the pain points right for your target audience and then build your offer around solving those pain points.
Once you've done that, all you need to do is pick a framework to start testing with... of which there are tons to choose from... AIDA, The 4 P's. FAB... the list goes on.
I've always like Jim Edwards, so to address my target audiences pain points, I went with his VSL framework, a proven method for crafting persuasive copy. The framework consisted of the following steps:
- Open with a shocking statement
- Identify the problem and highlight its significance
- Agitate the problem to evoke strong emotions
- Intensify the problem, pushing it beyond the threshold
- Introduce the solution to capture interest
- Establish credibility and reasons to trust the product
- Provide proof of the product's effectiveness
- List the specific benefits customers will gain from the purchase
- Create a sense of urgency and specific reasons to act immediately
- Close with a compelling call to action
After plugging everything in, I took some time to tweak the sales letter. It doesn't follow Jim's framework to the T, but it's pretty close.
The Final Result: A Compelling Video Sales Letter Yielding a 17.75% Clickthrough Rate to the Order Page:
Please watch the video below to experience the crafted sales letter firsthand. It incorporates the researched pain points, addresses the target audience's needs, and presents Multiplication Secrets as the ultimate solution. After the video, continue reading for the written version of the sales letter.
Here is the script for the VSL written out. Enjoy!
"Is your child struggling with learning the multiplication tables 0-12?
Are they frustrated with not being able to recall the answers quickly?
Do you, as a parent, feel like you can’t help them because the way YOU learned multiplication is totally different from how it’s taught in schools today?
Do you feel guilty as a parent because you feel like you have to FORCE your child to sit down to do something they hate?
If that’s you, then you’re in luck...
If you commit the next few minutes to watching this presentation, you’ll discover the exact method we’ve used to teach thousands of kids to memorize ALL of the multiplication tables 0-12 in under a week with only about 15 minutes of study per day!
Here's the truth… YOU’RE NOT ALONE!
According to a recent survey we ran, 92% of parents with children between the ages of 7 and 11 said that their child was struggling with multiplication!
The reality is that MOST children in the public school system today struggle with learning, mastering multiplication facts 0-12. Why?
If you’re a parent, you know that you or your child struggles with at least one of the following problems
- They’re impatient with themselves, so when they don't learn something the first time they get frustrated with their lack of personal progress
- They just aren’t motivated to learn multiplication because they don’t see the real value in it and will always use the “but I can just use a calculator” excuse
- They have a short attention span, so it’s hard to get them to sit down even for a few minutes to practice a concept
- They struggle with larger more difficult multiplication facts for digits like the 7's, 8's, 9's, 11's and 12's
- You as a parent feel like you can't help them because they're learning the “common core” method which is completely different from the way you were taught...
- Your child just doesn't have great mental recall to start with, so memorizing abstract concepts simply doesn’t work
- You've tried other online courses but they lack the resources and support your child needs to make REAL progress
- Your child has a different learning style from other kids, and doesn’t get enough personal attention from their teacher to accommodate it
As a parent, you may have seen your child struggle with one or more of these issues...
But that's not the end of the list of problems...
It actually gets worse...
Here's the Real Problem you're facing
All of these problems can lead to higher stress with tests or timed quizzes, which leads to "cramming" without long term memorization, mistakes because of rushing through problems, reverting to finger counting, or straight up guessing…
This leads to problems with ALL forms of higher math, including division, fractions, exponents and MUCH more…
It can bring children down and have them struggling with low confidence, second guessing themselves, or feeling like they're behind the class and have to work harder while other kids just stroll by...
And worst of all, this can even lead to vicious bullying…
And NO, we’re not making this up, though I wish we were...
Sadly, this is an exact quote from one of the parents we surveyed, speaking about her daughter,
“She cant remember the processes or numbers well and requires reminders… the other students tease her and make fun of her which makes her feel bad...”
This is HEARTBREAKING!
These sorts of things will cause a child to get even MORE frustrated and have even LESS patience with themselves, LESS of a desire to learn multiplication, and eventually a hatred for math and school altogether!
It’s no wonder why the Hechinger Report reported that over 50% of students don’t pass college algebra with a grade of C or above…
If your child has gone through these issues you don’t even have to use your imagination… you KNOW how heartbreaking it is to see them struggle like that.
Now, you as a parent have to realize that if you’re seeing your child go through any of these struggles IT’S NOT YOUR FAULT!
Stop feeling bad about the tension between you and your child when you’re trying to get him/her to study…
stop feeling like a failure as a parent…
and STOP feeling like the bad guy… It's not your fault!
It’s actually the education system that’s failed you…
This could not be more true than when it comes to how multiplication is taught in schools these days.
Because of the school boards decisions, more stress is being put on the relationship between you and your child…
We know that because we hear about it from parents all the time… one mother told us she felt like it was all “her fault”… and that she felt like a “failure” as a mother…
Now, you know that you don’t want your child to struggle anymore… but to do that they need some confidence… they need some tiny wins to feel more patient with themselves and to feel like they’re making progress...
If they could just make a little progress, you know it would lift their spirits...
If they could get those basic multiplication facts mastered this would be the boost in confidence they need to feel better about themselves and be able to take on more challenges in life...
So, what are your options?
Well, you could try to help them yourself...
But if you’ve tried that, you know this is a challenge because the school board decided to teach your child multiplication in a COMPLETELY different way than you were taught...
To make this work you’d have to devote hours and weeks to relearning everything yourself before you even start teaching them...
Honestly, who has the free time to be able to do that??
And not only that, but if you don’t know how to accommodate different learning styles none of it will matter anyway…
You’ll end up FORCING your child into something they’re frustrated with… which means you’ll still look like “the bad guy” in your child's eyes and feel GUILTY for fighting them…
Put simply… you’re doing something you don’t wanna do and they’re doing something they don’t wanna do… NEITHER OF YOU ARE HAPPY!
This flat out doesn’t work…
This all means you get to spend LESS time with your children doing things that are ENJOYABLE for your family and MORE time putting STRESS on your relationships…
Honestly, wouldn’t you rather go to the park or enjoy a picnic with your child, instead?
Now, the other option is private tutoring…
But the problem with this is that GOOD private tutors can cost up to $80 PER HOUR, and it can go MUCH higher than that!
In fact, some tutors charge upwards of $150 per hour… at 2 sessions a week, that's $1,200 per month!
And after weeks or even MONTHS of tutoring, there’s still NO guarantee that your child will have mastered the basic multiplication facts...
This means you could end up wasting THOUSANDS of dollars and NEVER see any results!
So what’s a parent supposed to do with this mess?
Well, what if I told you that there IS a way your child can learn all of the basic multiplication tables quickly and easily?
In fact, so easily that your child could have all multiplication facts from 0-12 MASTERED in 7 days?
And what if I were to tell you that it WOULDN’T cost you an arm and a leg?
Luckily for you, there's now a solution...
Introducing...
“Multiplication Secrets”
… the FASTEST way to learn the multiplication facts 0-12 today!
Multiplication Secrets will give your child the tools and techniques to memorize the multiplication tables quickly and easily.
It’s SO effective that your child could have ALL of the basic times tables up to 12 learned and mastered in less than a week with only about 15 minutes of study per day!
No more drilling flashcards for hours and hours on end!
And if you’re skeptical, I get it… this is a BOLD statement after all.
…But if you commit to watching for the next 3 minutes we’re going to prove it to you with a demo...
This program is Easy & Fun…
Which means your child will no longer be Impatient or frustrated with themself...
and that means they'll NEVER learn to hate math or school
Our program lessons are quick, running between 2 And 8 Minutes For Each Lesson.
You won't have to fight your child's short attention span, which means you can avoid the guilt that comes with forcing them to sit down for hours to do something they hate
It will help them get better Grades, and in turn build their confidence!
Your child won't feel like they have to second guess him/herself so they'll NEVER feel left behind the rest of the classroom...
Multiplication Secrets will unlock the patterns behind the numbers…
This means that your child will FINALLY realize the importance of multiplication and be more motivated to learn…
They’ll never use the “I can just use a calculator” excuse AGAIN!
Our program will build a better foundation for ALL higher math…
Your child will be fully equipped when they start learning division, fraction, decimals, exponents and ALL other forms of higher math, which means you'll save them from TONS of frustration in the future…
You’ll be setting them up for success in school and in LIFE!
Multiplication Secrets has been proven to help students with higher, more difficult tables such as the 7's, 8's, 9's, 11's And 12's...
Your child won't have to rely on a calculator, counting on their fingers or straight up guessing, which means they'll never feel overwhelmed, stressed, or frustrated when they see those BIG numbers
Our program is also “parent Friendly”
It’s designed for you to be a complete “plug and play” system…
Going through this multiplication system is as simple as sitting
down beside them and clicking the play button… it’s all there!
This means you won't ever have to worry about the fact that you learned a different method growing up, so you'll never feel like you can't help your child...
This also means you can either follow the schedule we provide for your child, or you can go through it whenever works best for you
Multiplication Secrets builds better and faster recall for all of the multiplication facts up to 12…
This means your child will have more confidence going into tests and timed quizzes so they won't ever be left guessing, rushing through problems, writing out the equations, or relying on a calculator.
This program uses interactive video designed to accommodate different learning types…
Your child will have a variety of tools to use, which means your child will grow in knowledge and confidence no matter what skill level or learning ability they have…
Not only that, but the lesson videos are built on our mobile optimized membership site, so your child can easily practice on the go!
Just picture this… the next time you have to go get your oil changed, you pull up to the auto shop and go into the lobby…
While you’re waiting for the mechanic, your child opens up a lesson on your cell phone… the 8’s… one of the most difficult sets of multiplication tables...
After a few minutes of waiting, the mechanic comes in and says “your car is all ready”...
While you finish paying, you’re child has already gone through the whole lesson and has the method for one of the most difficult set’s of numbers committed to memory…
HOW AMAZING WOULD THAT BE?
Last but not least… THIS PROGRAM WILL SAVE YOU THOUSANDS OF DOLLARS ON TUTORING…
When your child learns all times tables 0-12 you’ll never have to waste a DOLLAR on tutoring for this topic AGAIN!
By now, you're probably asking...
“Who are you and how can you make these claims?”
To answer that, let me introduce you to Thomas McMullin, the creator of “Multiplication Secrets”...
Tom has been teaching elementary school for 2 decades!
And in that time he’s taught THOUSANDS of students in both public and private schools in MANY states across the U.S…
Not only that, he’s spent a lot of time doing private tutoring.
After seeing the flaws in the common core method and how parents had NO way to help their children at home, he was determined to find a better way for my students to memorize the multiplication facts.
Finally, after 2 decades of research and testing, we believe Tom has come up with THE FASTEST way to memorize the times tables from 0 to 12.
After having tested this on THOUSANDS of students over the past decade, it has had a 100% success rate inside of Tom’s classrooms…
How’s THAT for a track record?!
Simply put, the reason we can make these claims is because THE SYSTEM WORKS!
To prove it to you, we’re gonna let Tom demonstrate how powerful this system is by showing you how to memorize one of the more difficult multiplication tables… the 9’s
*INSERT VIDEO CLIP FROM THE SERIES*
Now, how long did that take? Under 2 minutes!
Now, you might have seen this technique before… but what you probably DON’T know is that there are similar patterns to this one for EVERY SINGLE digit from zero to 12!
And what’s MORE shocking is that each of them can be learned almost as quickly!
But don’t take my word for it…
See what some of our customers are saying...
Here’s what Kim said, one of the parents who’s started using our program...
“AWESOME! I have 4 kiddos checking it out… even my older ones… it’s a REALLY cool system!”
And here’s what Lee said after going through the program...
“I just viewed the whole presentation, and honestly it's AMAZING! It's been SOOOO helpful... I wish I had this when I was a kid... it would've saved my mom, and not to mention, my teacher, SO much frustration… I’ve even started recommending this course to my sister for my niece, nephews and basically any parent I know who has a child in elementary school… I can’t stop talking about it… In fact, I’ve referred over 22 parents and teachers who have enrolled their kids in the course so far!”
Here's Exactly What’s Included With “Multiplication Secrets”...
- Complete Step By Step instructions on How To Memorize The Multiplication Tables in Just 30 Minutes
- Quick review videos for daily practice (between 2 and 8 minutes each)
- The complete PDF worksheet pack
- The answer key PDF so your child can fact check their answers
- The exact study schedule Tom has used to teach thousands of students how to memorize ALL times tables 0-12 in JUST 1 week with about 15 minutes of study per day
Now, not only do we want to help set your child up for success, but we ALSO want to make your life easier as a parent...
You see, we’ve been in the education biz a long time, and we’ve seen the struggles that THOUSANDS of parents go through…
We know that forcing your child to do school work has caused strain on your relationship with your child…
It can make a parent feel guilty… or like the “Bad Cop”...
We also know you probably HATE to see when your child is struggling so bad with something and not making ANY progress...
Which is why we decided to sweeten the pot for you…
SO IF YOU ACT BEFORE THE TIMER ON THIS PAGE HITS ZERO, YOU GET THESE 4 AMAZING BONUSES FOR FREE
- BONUS #1: 4 Ways To Strengthen The Bond With Your Children, a $9.95 value
- BONUS #2: 9 Ways To Forge Loving Ties That Last A Lifetime In Your Children, a $12.95 value
- BONUS #3: A Parent’s Guide To Calmer Mornings, a $9.95 value
- BONUS #4: 14 Ways To Make Your Child Feel Special, a $12.95 value
As you can see, these bonuses total over $45, but you get them FREE when you act before the timer on this page hit’s zero…
AT this point you might be wondering how to get a hold of this amazing program...
This program took over a decade to test and perfect… It has never existed before…
The amount of tutoring time it’s taken to develop alone makes this program worth well into the thousands of dollars...
And to get the same results with a private tutor teaching older outdated methods or “common core”... it could easily take 5 or 10 sessions…
At $150 per hour, that could be up to $1500…
And you wouldn’t even get the awesome bonuses we’re giving you today...
But today we’re not going to charge you $1500,
And we’re not going to charge you $500 either…
In fact, if you cut that in half, you STILL won’t even be close!
Cut THAT in half and you STILL won’t even be close...
Here's what we want to do for you: We’re so sure this will completely transform your and your child’s lives that we’re going to let you try the entire course, including all of the FREE bonuses for 7 days for the starting price of just $1.
Then, at the end, you get to be the judge. Either we live up to our word or we don't.
If we do deliver what we promise and you love the information, do nothing and we'll charge your credit card $67.
If we don't deliver, or you don't think the information was worth the price, just send us an email before midnight, and we won't charge you anything.
Plus, you can download and keep the bonuses completely free just for giving us a shot...
Does that sound fair?
It's kind of like going to a restaurant and only paying if you love the food.
Or going to a movie, and if you hate it . . . then you pay NOTHING . . .
Now, maybe you see from the demo and from some of our customer feedback just how POWERFUL this system is…
If THAT’S the case, I want to give you a chance to save EVEN MORE…
So, you’ll see that we’ve provided a second payment option…
If you decide to skip the trial and purchase the full course, plus bonuses today, you can save an additional 30% and get it for a one time payment of just $47!
And not to worry, if you end up not liking the course or if you don’t feel we’ve delivered on our commitments, we’ll give you our 30 day “Money back” guarantee...
That’s right, we’ll give you a full 30 days to try it out… if you don’t like it, we’ll give you your money back, no questions asked!
Now before I go on, I want to talk about one last MASSIVE bonus… I saved it for the end because I only wanted to share it with the parents that were committed enough to watch through the whole presentation…
If you’ve watched this far you obviously REALLY care about your child's future and see the value of building a strong foundation in math…
What if I told you that there was a way for you to get this course completely for FREE?
Or better yet, what if I told you that there was a way to actually MAKE money from this course… and not only that, but to help other struggling students in the process?
Well… there is…
Let me explain
See, we know that if your child is struggling with multiplication because of common core, his/her unique needs, or maybe even because of a bad teacher… there are probably OTHER kids in the class they know that are also struggling with it.
We WANT to help those kids too, but to be honest, because we don’t have the backing of the education system (the common core teachers HATE us)... We are at risk of shutting down at any moment.
We need the help of anyone who sees just how important solid education is to spread the word.
That’s why we decided to open up our referral program to a small number of devoted parents…
So when you purchase today, you’ll have the ability to make a 50% commission anytime you refer our program to another child or parent in need.
At 50% that means to make your money back on what you spent today, all you have to do is refer 2 students!
And at the normal price of $67, if you refer just 10 students that would make you over $300!
All that would take is to send your referral link over to your child's math teacher and have THEM recommend the program!
How's THAT for a deal? While other parents are shelling out hundreds of dollars on tutoring, you could be MAKING hundreds while helping them at the same time!
Here’s how it works… when you purchase today we automatically make you a referral partner, without ANY extra work involved… it’s as simple as that… As soon as you login you’ll receive your unique referral link in the members area.
All you have to do is click “share”...
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Remember… if you wait until the timer hits zero, not only…
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